I am a wacky kid who plays lots of video games.
I wonder what the horizon looks like from the top of the world.
I hear the wind whistling in my ears.
I see huge giants in the trees.
I want to live in a nice house and live a long life.
I am a wacky kid who plays lots of video games.
I become a cat when I am with my cats.
I feel like the government watches me.
I touch others hearts to get close to them.
I worry about my family members getting Ebola.
I cry for my uncle who passed away long ago.
I am a wacky kid who plays lots of video games.
I understand how cell reproduction works.
I say aliens are real with their big black eyes and slender grey bodies.
I dream about being rich and living a good life.
I try to make new friends and be nice to people.
I hope for good grades in school.
I am Thomas Sheldon.
16 comments:
You are awesome Thomas. Make sure you got your tinfoil hat because the government is watching.
Nice poem, it was good.
Thomas,
Great job,
I lie how you incorporate your family and thoughts about your uncle who passed on.
I like how at the end of almost every stanza you put I am a wacky kid who likes to play video games, indeed you are :p
I like your poem I especially love how you said you were afraid of your family getting Ebola I thought it was funny and creative.
I like how you repeated that you were a wacky kid who loves video games. It emphasizes how much you really like video games.
I laughed about the part about you worrying about your family getting Ebola. I probably shouldn't because same, but it was funny! Good poem!
This poem really shows your inner person and tells us how you are.
I like how you said you're a cat when with cats. If you need someone to take your cat I will happily house your cat.
This poem reflects you very well and I liked all the different aspects you put In it.
I liked your poem a lot. My favorite part was when you said, "I become a cat when I am with my cats."
That's insanely relatable.
Your poem was very straight forward and I like that. I got to know you without trying to figure out the alternative meaning.
I like how you expressed your imagination with the Giants in the trees.
I liked the personification you used, hear the wind whistling and seeing giants in the trees. I liked how you described who you were. I can relate to the wacky part not the video games
I like how you fear for your family getting Ebola
I like how you described specific things about you, your thoughts and actions are what define you, and no one else can have them but you.
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